I would have to agree with sacredsky, the background is a bit too clutterred. It
distracts the eye from the scan which should be the main focus of the wallie.
Try to make it a little more simple. Maybe considder using a gradient that runs
from pink to white instead of the solid pink background? Keep up the good work.
Try making the tree outside and the petals blowing into the room a bit lighter
to fit the scan a bit better. The border on the window needs some work too. The
concept is great and it would make a really nice wallie once you refined it a
bit. Keep it up!
Definately a lot of improvement on the first try sofar. I'm too lazy to read
through everyone's comments heheh so if someone already mentioned this gomenasai
^_^*
On the far bank the grass looks like it is growng out of the water, the edge
just isnt quite right. Other rhan that its looking great sofar, keep up the good
work!
I would also agree to remove the text going across the character's body. You can
use the clone tool to do mot of the work. The circle with the 5 inside makes me
think of a manga novel so maybe take that away too. Hope this helps ^_^*
Goodluck!
I would have to agree with MidnightHeiress, you really need to work on your
extraction. There is clearly a lot of white pixels around the scan that need to
be removed. The scan is also a bit blurry. SO maybe considder a better quality
scan or you could vector the one you have. The background is a good start. Keep
it up!
I am having a bit of a problem with my notifications. It says there is 19
Notifications and when I click on the link there is nothing there. It has been
like this for a few months and I hoped it would sort itself out but it hasnt. Is
there anything I can do to fix it?
The twins look like it was extracted from a screen-shot. The quality really isnt
that great and detracts from the positive things in your wallie. The background
looks nice but I would have to agree that the guys would have to go though. The
colours work really well together and I like the concept for the wallie, but
maybe look around MT if you can't find a better quality scan to use. Good luck!
Keep up the good work!
Great background and the colours work well together. I have to agree that the
scan however isnt the best choice, it is blurred and badly extracted so I would
rather go with another scan if you have one. The moon would definately fit in
better if you make it look more like the drawing style of the buildings.
I would maybe go with a different colour for the font as there isnt really too
much pink elsewhere to balance it out. And top right corner the hair needs a bit
more detail in the extraction. Otherwise looks good. Keep it up ^_^*
I definately like the second version better. The polygons add a more futuristic
feel to the wallpaper. The text I have to admit Im not crazy about. It doesnt
seem to fir, try a more future-orientated font?
Well I would say that it was good enough for submission. I like the faded scan
and the flower brush ads an element of romance to the wallpaper. And if you have
seen the anime Getbackers you would definately know that romance is what this
couple is all about ^_^* Good job - keep it up!
I like the colours and the composition. You might want to take a look at making
everything a bit more seemless. In other words that all the elements fit better
together in terms of texture.
Im not sure if those glass-like objects floating around fit with the wallie. I
would leave them out if I were you. With some sharpening and the changes to the
background this could be a rocking wallie. Good Luck.
I like the scan and I think it definately has potential. Maybe look at using a
shade of pink to go with her hair for the background instead of that vivid
purple. You might want to use a little less text cause there is a whole lot of
ot in the wall. Good luck and keep it up ^_^*
Here are some of the suggested changes. Hope it is an improvement. ^_^*
Well I took some of the advise and this is what I came up with. Is it any better or am I going in completely the wrong direction?
Im not really sure why it got deleted from the gallery, I spent quite a bit of time on it. I just got the standard Bot reply so I have no clue.
I would have to agree with sacredsky, the background is a bit too clutterred. It distracts the eye from the scan which should be the main focus of the wallie. Try to make it a little more simple. Maybe considder using a gradient that runs from pink to white instead of the solid pink background? Keep up the good work.
Try making the tree outside and the petals blowing into the room a bit lighter to fit the scan a bit better. The border on the window needs some work too. The concept is great and it would make a really nice wallie once you refined it a bit. Keep it up!
Definately a lot of improvement on the first try sofar. I'm too lazy to read through everyone's comments heheh so if someone already mentioned this gomenasai ^_^*
On the far bank the grass looks like it is growng out of the water, the edge just isnt quite right. Other rhan that its looking great sofar, keep up the good work!
I would also agree to remove the text going across the character's body. You can use the clone tool to do mot of the work. The circle with the 5 inside makes me think of a manga novel so maybe take that away too. Hope this helps ^_^* Goodluck!
I would have to agree with MidnightHeiress, you really need to work on your extraction. There is clearly a lot of white pixels around the scan that need to be removed. The scan is also a bit blurry. SO maybe considder a better quality scan or you could vector the one you have. The background is a good start. Keep it up!
I am having a bit of a problem with my notifications. It says there is 19 Notifications and when I click on the link there is nothing there. It has been like this for a few months and I hoped it would sort itself out but it hasnt. Is there anything I can do to fix it?
The twins look like it was extracted from a screen-shot. The quality really isnt that great and detracts from the positive things in your wallie. The background looks nice but I would have to agree that the guys would have to go though. The colours work really well together and I like the concept for the wallie, but maybe look around MT if you can't find a better quality scan to use. Good luck! Keep up the good work!
Great background and the colours work well together. I have to agree that the scan however isnt the best choice, it is blurred and badly extracted so I would rather go with another scan if you have one. The moon would definately fit in better if you make it look more like the drawing style of the buildings.
Good luck! Keep up the good work!
Its a great start and I can recommend this page to find some nice photoshop tutorials - http://www.photoshopsupport.com/tutorials.html
I would maybe go with a different colour for the font as there isnt really too much pink elsewhere to balance it out. And top right corner the hair needs a bit more detail in the extraction. Otherwise looks good. Keep it up ^_^*
I definately like the second version better. The polygons add a more futuristic feel to the wallpaper. The text I have to admit Im not crazy about. It doesnt seem to fir, try a more future-orientated font?
Well I would say that it was good enough for submission. I like the faded scan and the flower brush ads an element of romance to the wallpaper. And if you have seen the anime Getbackers you would definately know that romance is what this couple is all about ^_^* Good job - keep it up!
I like the colours and the composition. You might want to take a look at making everything a bit more seemless. In other words that all the elements fit better together in terms of texture.
I heard a song that I really like watching a Gungrave video so I found out it was a band called Switchfoot. Now I LOVE all their songs! ^_^*
Im not sure if those glass-like objects floating around fit with the wallie. I would leave them out if I were you. With some sharpening and the changes to the background this could be a rocking wallie. Good Luck.
I think it does need something. Maybe some text or a brush maybe. Looks good sofar, but I am not sure it is complete yet.
Sugoi! A major improvement from your first attempt. I think it is definately ready for submission in the gallery. Great Job! ^_^*
I like the scan and I think it definately has potential. Maybe look at using a shade of pink to go with her hair for the background instead of that vivid purple. You might want to use a little less text cause there is a whole lot of ot in the wall. Good luck and keep it up ^_^*
Yeah thanks for the really great wallie material. I havent seen that many good fate stay night scans so this helps a whole lot ^_^*
WOW! These are great! I would love to use them in a wallie ^_^* Thank you so much for sharing them!
The Tifa one is kawaii ^_^* Thx for sharing!
Great scans! Thanks for sharing. I am such a huge FMA fan ^_^* Arigatou!